Constructive criticism from other groups
We had good use of effects, we had good camera work, good use of props for mise-en-scene.
It had a CCTV effect on one scene. We had good editing.

To improve we could slow the pace down as it was too fast. We should adjust the sound track. One group thought that the opening was too long.

First stages otf editing

The first time that we went out and filmed some our footage in the first proper location was on the long road field. We filmed the zoom on the eye firstly then we film the lonely woman in the corner. We came back to the class room and started to edit the footage. For the eye we used vignette to give a rounded effect around the eye. We used two motion key frame points to create a zoom effect into the eye. At the moment we haven't used any effects on the woman because it is quite good how it is. The whole idea of the flashbacks is to reference the previous 'film', which we have based our opening on, this opening is a sequel.

Test footage

We went out in the school grounds to find some suitable locations. One place that we did find was in the art block. We thought that the chains were quite suited to our ideas. When we created our storyboard we added chains to our ideas as a flash back. We used an effect on the chains to make them more creepy, we used find edges. Then we layered the footage so that they blended together so that we got a weird stylized type clip.